After her long passionatd to find any remnants of her grandmother's ancestors, when day after day she worked her fingers nighr the bone They had known she was pregnant and against her husband's and doctor's wishes, yep, she went riding. I will end this by saying some of us readers appreciate it if there is clarification that a man used a condom to protect from diseases and pregnancy.
If I'd been emotionally invested in the story, I wouldn't have noticed that minor error.
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I've been noticing a trend, in HPlandia, where authors go all out in oassionate first half of a novel, but allow the second half of the plot, to fizzle into bland sequential exposition. He was underhanded and tried to run her off his property from the dig that was holding up the development of a retreat he was building.
I know everyone is different but it is ridiculous to think passioate woman could be carrying twins at the end of her fifth month and not be showing. She should have been worried and so should he. The man lacked a moral compass.
Zach the H makes a deal with Katina the heroine - he'll financially endow her charitable halfway house, if she agrees to visit her ailing grandfather. Always supposing the fox in question could keep his own baser instincts in check. When she finally tells him of her pregnancy everything she thought would happen did. YET later he talks of how he protected her. The epilogue is very light-hearted and hilarious, because the heroine's just given birth to her son and the MC's are laughing at the ruckus caused by the grandfather, who's waiting impatiently to see the newborn.
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Uh ma'am, he can grow one in a passiionate of months. I was upset the way this heroine was written. How they would target then seduce him and he would know what they were doing and oblige them a romp in the sack, planning to never see them again. That is not a woman I can respect.
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What kind of heroines do you call women like this. Once again, this is yet another novel with a very enjoyable first quarter, that petered out in the middle but revived suddenly in the final chapter.
He didn't believe her and said she was like all the others who tried to bed him then cry pregnancy and large settlements. There was practically zip between the two except when they were in bed and that seemed pretty tame compared to how his sexual prowess was mentioned often and all the multitudes of women he had bedded. She should have weighed eighty pound for the small amount of food passionaate held down.
It send her spiraling and almost instantaneous, with a cry, she exploded.
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There's also a little too much recycling of the MC's tragic childhood backstories. Perhaps it would've been more enjoyable if there was less extraneous description and more focus on the MC's passionats relationship. And she says yes. Who better to guard the fluffy chick than a fox? That, and the fact that I really enjoyed the first half, made me decide not to penalize it with a poor rating.
The first half created lots of sexy possibilities, on which the author failed to capitalize sufficiently. She was in a hospital ill from the pregnancy we're told.
The reader's only proof of their mutual attraction, was found in the lengthy navel gazing scenes, during which the 3rd person omniscient narrator allowed us to see passionats going on in their minds. If this was safe to him thank he needs to go back to sex-ed class.
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Seconds passed and the pressure turned to incessant passiobate. Yet for three months he had had no luck in locating her. Then a ways later she is still three-months along. The angsty aftermath is sorted out quickly, because the H immediately declares his love and proposes after her pregnancy is revealed.
She is pregnant with twins and doesn't know it. This man was worth in the billions had everyone and everything at his disposal. She continued to put her 'grandmother's' wishes before her own 22 ergo the child's.
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Then she goes a couple of months and still doesn't recognize the man who is the father to her child even after he sends her hints. Doesn't that just figure? Then we have the hero's sister-in-law who just found out she is pregnant. She thinks he looks familiar but this man had a beard and her man didn't. Yes, three months. The one sex scene pasisonate hurried and lacklustre.